Drabble: Katie got a little too drunk at a party and passed out on the couch. John was ready to leave so he went looking for his girlfriend, Katie. He eventually found her sleeping on the couch next to another guy. John was upset, but woke up Katie and took her home. He was accusing at first, but after Katie explained herself that she fell asleep while the couch was unoccupied, John forgave her.
Note: A story about relationship troubles. This was fortunately overcome by communication, listening, and love.
Hi Dylan. I like how your microfictions related to each other. This showed me how stories can be compressed or expanded as much as an author likes, and however it suits them. I was a bit baited by your title, since they do not actually break up in the end. Truly, communication is the best way to keep relationships together
ReplyDeleteHi Dylan! I liked how your microfictions showed that communication can make or break a relationship. In the first one, we don't really get any insight in the relationship and only see that it's great on the outside. However, the second story really expands on it and shows the reality of being in a relationship and how communication with your partner is important. Relationships can be hard, but open and honest communication can bring you closer to your partner, despite the obstacles.
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