There once was a small little peaceful pond just beyond some trees. Three little frogs lived there. The three siblings loved to cross the pond by jumping on lily pads as they floated across the water. They loved racing across the water by waiting for the pads to line up and hopping across them. One day they encountered a friendly little kitten by their pond. This kitten had played all the games around his home and mastered them all. His name was Chester. Chester was the most athletic kitten of his home and needed new games and competition to occupy his time and test his skills. He noticed the young frogs playing their lily pad game and approached them casually.
"Hello there frogs," Chester said politely. "What is it that you're playing?"
The frogs responded, "We are racing across the pond on these lily pads to see which of us is the fastest! Would you like to try?"
Of course Chester wanted to try! He wanted to be the fastest to cross the pond!
So the frogs showed him how it was done. They had to jump on a lily pad, wait for the next one to float by, then jump on it and wait to repeat the process. "It's a game of patience, speed, skill, and agility!" The frogs said excitedly.
"I am fast, skillful, and agile!" The kitten responded as he was practicing. "I think I'm ready to beat you three!"
"Are you sure you're ready? We have been doing this for a while. Are you sure you don't want more practice?" The frogs said. "The pond can be dangerous if you were to fall in. Can you swim?"
"I don't need to swim!" Replied the kitten. "I am going to win without touching a single drop!"
So the four of them lined up on the bank of the pond eager to race to see who was the best. At the start of the race, the kitten pulled ahead. He was faster than the frogs, so he was able to quickly hop across the lily pads that were grouped together. As they reached the middle of the pond, the lily pads grew farther and farther apart. The kitten had to wait on the pads to come closer, but the frogs could jump farther and reach the pads before they were close enough for the kitten to reach. By this point, one frog pulled ahead of the kitten. The kitten was doing all he could to catch up, but with the spacing of the lily pads, the frog's lead grew. The kitten started making riskier and riskier jumps to catch the frog.
"Be careful Chester," the frogs said, "those jumps are dangerous. Please don't fall in."
"Don't worry," Chester replied, " just a little more!"
Chester was gaining on the lead frog, but the finish line was coming up fast.
Chester made one last risky jump to retake the lead, but the lily pad wasn't quite close enough. He fell in the pond. Chester paddled and splashed, but he kept sinking lower into the water. The frogs jumped in after him, but they were not strong enough to save poor Chester.
Chester, the kitten, was just too competitive. He couldn't stand to lose, and he didn't have the patience to wait for the lily pads to come closer to him. His mistakes cost him the ultimate price.
Author's Note:
I got the inspiration to write this story from the Talking Turtle and the Geese. In that story, the turtle always had to get a word in even when it was against his best interest. He annoyed may of the creatures around him with his constant yapping, but he made friends with the geese. The geese knew of a mountainous area where they migrated every winter with plenty of room where no other creatures could hear you. The geese knew how much the turtle loved to talk, so they offered to help carry the turtle up to the mountains with them. Their plan was to carry a stick between their beaks, and the turtle could bite the stick to hitch a ride with them. The turtle could live out his talkative days in the mountains and could talk to his heart's content. On their journey, some boys were poking fun at the turtle for riding along with geese. Unfortunately, the turtle could not keep his mouth shut, and he released the branch for a rebuttal. He fell to his death on the journey. I added my own twist by changing the animals and setting, but I still taught a lesson about discipline and patience that both the turtle and kitten lacked.
From Jataka Tales by Ellen C. Babbitt
Dylan!
ReplyDeleteI like this story. This story was a throwback to the early early stories this semester! I couldn't remember the original version of the story, so I was able to read this as an original story. I immediately knew where it was headed, and I like that about stories that stories that are trying to teach a lesson. Nice story. I like your version.
Hey Dylan!
ReplyDeleteI loved your story! The description that you gave during the reading really helped me envision like I was their part taking in the story. I feel that is how you draw people in and get them interested. I also really enjoyed the dialogue between both characters. It seems like to often people, including myself, don’t add dialogue and I feel that it takes away from the story we are reading. Overall, great job and I cannot wait to read more.
Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your story because I also did one over the Turtle and Geese but both of ours are so different. It is so cool to see how everyone interprets things differently. I like how you introduced the cat as a new character and also how you made him the reason for his own downfall. The overall theme is great and very teaching of how our intentions sometimes never turn out to what we mean them to be.
Hi Dylan, your story was very enjoyable to read– it reminded me a little bit of the turtle and the hare story; arrogance of any sort can be dangerous! I'm still really bummed that the kitten died though. I appreciate that your author's note had a nice detailed description of the original story. It allowed me to better understand the parallels you were trying to draw from the old story to your new one!
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